I wrangled another chueh-chu (the way I pronounce it it sounds like a treat for the dogs) so I’m posting it for today’s Scavenger Hunt. I hope it’s okay to do the same form twice, but I like the chueh-chu, and writing a second one was hard!
Midnight
In the deep dark of the night,
I heard a fox, treading light,
through the meadow, by the house,
heard the blackbirds cluck in fright,
through the window, saw the flight
of a barn owl, ghostly white,
as the night world came to life,
bathed in silver, rich samite.
I’m tickled that you love this form! And you do it well too! If nothing else come of this scavenger hunt, at least there is a little more diversity of forms in WP poems!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Any exercise is good, I think. It makes us consider how we use words, how we choose them, and why. I’ve enjoyed using forms I’d never have tried otherwise xx
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Beautiful
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xx
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*APPLAUSE!*
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Silver light–perfect for both fox and owl. (K)
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If the nights were milder, it would be tempting to be outside;
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Lovely images. It makes me think of Blake’s The Tyger–the rhyme and rhythm maybe.
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You’re right! I hadn’t noticed, but it’s just missing the burning bright 🙂
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🙂
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I like the chueh-chu form, too. It’s fun to challenge yourself with the aaxa, aaxa version. You carried it off here!
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