As expected, the Oracle’s message was not a happy one. It seems to me that it fits the images of Paul Brookes’ ekphrastic challenge though. Another unintentional sonnet.
The shame of it all
The world was a wild garden once,
its music strummed by the wind,
sung by the birds,
a garden where women walked without fear,
until someone put his finger to his lips
and laid in wait and shame,
put his strength to destruction,
engendered the sorrow and the pity.
Where wild roses rambled, and the green forest
kept watch, he set an ocean of plastic.
We wander in the desert now,
no flag to unite us, and fear dogs our steps,
that lead only to the murmuring ocean,
cradling the corpses of penguin chicks.
I don’t understand mine, but somehow it seems to complement yours. Yes, here we are, and how do we get back? Can we? (K)
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What struck me about your poem was how it seems to be feeling its way, blindly almost, and that’s the point of it.Yes; we’re all floundering in the dark, just some are happy with it that way.
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Most people don’t even realize it I think.
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I think you’re right.
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The shame indeed.βIs there a way back to that garden?
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Not while the men are running the show, no, I don’t think there is.
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Or some of the women.
South Dakota governor Kristi Noem (Republican, of course) is bragging about she killed her 14-month puppy because he wasn’t a good hunting dog and didn’t obey her. Then she killed a goat she didn’t like. She’s hoping to be the former guy’s running mate.
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When the role model for a whole society is a man with a big gun, not surprising the women who want to be the top of the heap adopt the same amoral attitudes. You’re right, there’s nothing intrinsically ‘good’ about women, it’s just that several millennia of being the underdogs have given us a different perspective on force and aggression. That South Dakotan woman is a disgrace to humanity, and even more to womanhood.
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Yes, true.
She’s despicable. Fortunately, she’s getting a lot of backlash.
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Good.
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Yes.
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A sorry state of affairs. I wrote about wars yesterday. When man does not pay heed, God will take care and nature is his weapon and his tool to save his creation.
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I stick with the science since there’s not a shred of evidence that anybody’s god has ever intervened in any disaster, war, genocide or to stop us destroying the planet. We’re doing these things all by ourselves, no supernatural force is going to save us, and it’s up to us to stop.
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I agree, Jane. What I meant was that if we don’t watch out, we’ll be heading towards an apocalypse.
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I think we are anyway. I understand that the multinationals don’t care about anything but profits and nor do their shareholders, but they must have children, grandchildren. What kind of future are they leaving them? Maybe they don’t care about that either. They’re the ones steering the ship. It’s terrifying.
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This really speaks to the moment.
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It’s a message that’s been around for too long, and nobody listening. We pick our causes and none of them are the right one.
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It’s a harsh world π
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