Landay sequence

A sequence of landay couplets in the spirit (I hope) of Afghan women’s poetry, for the Scavenger Hunt.

Landay sequence

Those days are gone, when, where rivers run
beneath the shade of trees, is the place where love is spun.

There’s a lovers’ place, I’ll take you there,
but would you dare the damp, the leaves in your rumpled hair?

A man fights fake monsters on his phone
each woman fights real demons in the dark all alone.

The heart’s place is green as this spring day,
distant now, and blue as dreams, a blue ocean away.

Author: Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

19 thoughts on “Landay sequence”

  1. Jane these are tremendous!! I especially like “A man fights fake monsters on his phone/each woman fights real demons in the dark all alone.” That one is amazing!!

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  2. Like others, this is the one that stood out to me. I think most women understand it.

    “A man fights fake monsters on his phone
    each woman fights real demons in the dark all alone.”

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      1. Well they drug a lot of disruptive kids here now. Diagnose them with ADHD and enrich the drug companies because they have to take the drugs forever. Heaven forbid they should try to actually find out what the child needs.

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      2. In the bad old days, kids sat in rows in silence and didn’t give the teacher any trouble. They didn’t learn much and they tended to leave school as soon as possible, but they didn’t give lip, never mind physically assault the teachers. Everyone was more deferential then and it wasn’t a good thing. But nor is the individualism that allows kids to knife a teacher who says something they don’t like. There has to be some kind of happy medium.

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