A cascade for dverse.
Watching the sunset
Where did the day go,
the time slip away?
The child became a woman
with mountains to climb,
a rocking horse of dreams.
Rain on the meadow
falls light when spring calls,
and the spring rises in answer,
and only I ask,
where did the day go.
Sun sets in purple prose
when the blackbirds fall silent,
and we listen for the next singers,
the owl or the fox, not letting
the time slip away
like children do
when they learn to fly.
We always seem to miss
that moment when
the child became a woman,
her wings fledged,
the sunset waiting
full of purple prose and promises.
The morning lay just beyond the horizon,
with mountains to climb,
castles in the air,
in the sand,
blowing in the wind,
and waiting, in gales of laughter,
a rocking horse of dreams.
My children, my grandchildren will be foremost in my thoughts this evening …. after reading your Cascade poem which is wise and wonderful!!!
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Thank you, Helen xx
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I really like your fantasy of sunset musings. Very well written. Such a great metaphor for life and the way it passes so quickly. Amazing we squeeze all those other things in between!
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Thanks Dwight. We do so many things without paying much attention, don’t we?
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Yes, many thing for sure!
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I especially love “Sun sets in purple prose
when the blackbirds fall silent,”❤️
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Thank you xx
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You’ve stretched time too in this beautiful cascade, Jane, and used splashes of colour and nostalgia to make it sparkle. I love the ‘rocking horse of dreams’, which reminded me of the corduroy rocking horse I bought my daughter for her fourth birthday. I found it in a second-hand shop near Streatham Common Station and carried it home on the bus. I also love the lines:
‘Sun sets in purple prose
when the blackbirds fall silent’
and
‘We always seem to miss
that moment when
the child became a woman’
so true, and something only mothers of daughters appreciate.
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Like a flower opening 🙂
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The cascade is a perfect form to use as way to describe the time slipping away….
made me think of Abba
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avPTdJh2j6s
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Thank you. I hadn’t thought of Abba, but they do have a song for almost everything.
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such a cascade of wonderings – gentle in its profundity yet striking the heart head on!
as moving as one of my favourite songs: “who knows where the time goes” – Sandy Denny
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Thank you. I don’t know either the song or the singer. I’ll look them up.
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Time is sudden and gradual all at once, just like all transitions–nature being the perfect mirror. (K)
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Yes, it is. Nothing seems to have moved for ages, but look away for an instant and the birds have all flown.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Colleen xx
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Lovely and wistful, Jane, the imagery parlaying the tone with color and emotion.
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Thank you. I do find sunset a melancholy time.
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